A great Travel Agencies Commercial Theme.
author: # 132
The music has just the right "Island"feel to it.Good idea to start the song with a 1/2 Ch.The listener is drawn right in.Verse melody has good appeal,and the lift to Ch is strong.Ch hook is very appealing,and I feel this would make for a great Travel Agencies Commercial.Also sounds like it could be a Tropical drink add,,and even a Sun Tanning lotion,if there was one with this name.The commercial prospects are strong.I would tag the end of the Ch with "Island Breeze",to really put the lyric hook in the listener's mind.Thhe bridge idea is cool,but I would not have the 2nd bridge follow so close to the 1st......Also a key modulation in the last Ch.would give a strong dynamic lift to the Ch out section.A very fun and pleasurable song.........
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Lyrics reflect a pure & innocent heart.
author: #132
Thank You Wing,,for the song submission.I did like your Romantic lyrics,and the upbeat style of the music.The songs have good structure,and the arrangements do well to tie everything together.I have noted in the song comments,where I feel some revisions could be made.I like your songs&feel "Island Breeze" has the strongest Commercial appeal.Your lyrics reflect a pure&inoocent heart,which is a real plus. Thank you again for the submission,and hope to hear more of your music in the future....Thanks.!!!
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